One of the things that I look for when looking at C.V.s is the spelling. There is no excuse for incorrect spelling on a C.V. as nearly all are made on some sort of word processor with spell check. (Bad words are underlined in red line !)
At the moment your C.V. would be filed in the misc. section of the bin.
If you did manage to get an interview the first question I would ask is to explain these magical good time keeping skills. I would be looking for a very creative answer. If not I would be going back to my lunch break.
Don't know what the hell City and guilds ict is?
On a layout point of view I would put your most recent activities at the top of each heading.
As I scan a C.V. I want to know what you are doing NOW and then look back at other jobs in a chronological order.
The same goes for your educational background. Put your most recent, which is usually your highest award first and then go backwards until you get to GCSEs.
Hobbies and interests are a bore to me as they usually make the person out to be boring and conformist.
You say you like motor sports particularly off roading ? Do you participate or are you sitting watching the telly? We all like to be fit and healthy, do you participate in team sports, do you have a training regime, are you on any mental diet plan ?
I would also change the " I like socialising in my spare time" as that to me infers that you will be on your mobile all the time to your mates. You could change that for:" I have a close circle of supportive friends who regularly meet up for...( some sort of organised social activity.)You don't need to lie just elaborate.
These are just some pointers for you which you can take with a pinch of salt if you want.
Just giving you the opinion of someone hiring an employee. You have to understand that YOU have to stand out in a C.V. without writing War and Peace. There are too many people applying for jobs with the same wording and layouts.
I would hazard a guess that this Indigo training helped you collate and produce the C.V. If they did then they are doing you a great disservice and that is not on.
It's not all doom and gloom just a bit of careful thought and attention to detail and you will get there. Remember this is YOUR C.V.
Hope that helps.