Constructive criticism wanted

[DeltaBravo]

I think this version is better - a little more to the point. Great job.

[kevinjohnsonmbe]

Very good..... 👍🏻

[Pinkfoot]

Like it , and your big stove

[scbk]

It's a good video, but the website address at the start and end is wrong

[gdh]

Nice video, it gets across all the information and is well made.

[SteveA]

It's a good video, but the website address at the start and end is wrong

 

Well spotted... should be LizLogs.co.uk

[Steve Bullman]

Looking good mate. 3 tiny peaves for me. The wind noise in a couple places is kinda annoying, although im not sure this necessarily detracts from the video, almost gives it that outdoorsy feel maybe. Secondly your use of the word 'ummm'. I hate hearing this, always sounds unprofessional to me, specially on a video production where you should know exactly what you're going to say without having to stop and think about it. That being said, it only happens once so i'm not sure its even that big a deal.

Finally, your wife doesn't seem as much in a hurry as you to get out of the truck at the start. Struck me that both of you getting out at the same time might look better.

 

Minor quibbles in the grand scheme of things and perhaps i'm being over analytical, but you're asking for opinions

 

Keep up the good work.

[scbk]

Finally, your wife doesn't seem as much in a hurry as you to get out of the truck at the start. Struck me that both of you getting out at the same time might look better.

 

She's a clever lass. It's a windy day and if she got out at the same time all the crisp packets/receipts/papers from the cab would be strewn across the field!

 

Wish my other half could learn this!

 

 

[Woodworks]

It's a good video, but the website address at the start and end is wrong

 

Good spot thanks.

 

 

 

Steve

 

Yes it's not perfect but he as only charged me £200 so not going to quibble. We did try to redo the sound and talking bit but guess it didn't not come out well. The more I rehearsed the more I stumbled over the words. Hate having a camera in my face at the best of times.

 

Thanks all again for your help

 

Beau