new website up and running, let me know what you think.

[Jamie M]

Adam, You should be really pleased with the site, I think its very good and agree with all the other points raised. Just one thing though, the spelling of 'solution' under services needs a tweak as currently its 'solutiuon'. Apart from that cracking.

[Adam]

ok mate i will get that changed. thanks:001_smile:

[Frank]

Yeah, nice smart, easy to follow site.

 

Just one thing I wasn't struck with straight away.

 

It's says you are no ordinary tree surgeons? It's says you are experts. It says you have over five years combined experience?

 

That's only 2 and a half years experience each (for 2people). This is NOT alot of experience in any proffesion. Let alone one where the "experts" and time served veterans are still learning. Just my opinion?

 

Also what is it that makes you not just any other tree surgeon? What sets you apart from the rest? I couldn't find anything on the site that explained this.

[Mark J]

Here you go mate, this is how your site comes up on my browser...

It's just that it's on your home page which is the first thing that people are going to see.

Edited June 8, 2010 by Mark J

[ad15]

also if you look at sparkos screenshot...just that top part of the page,, says "tree surgery" no less than 7 times.....

[Adam]

Yeah, nice smart, easy to follow site.

 

Just one thing I wasn't struck with straight away.

 

It's says you are no ordinary tree surgeons? It's says you are experts. It says you have over five years combined experience?

 

That's only 2 and a half years experience each (for 2people). This is NOT alot of experience in any proffesion. Let alone one where the "experts" and time served veterans are still learning. Just my opinion?

 

Also what is it that makes you not just any other tree surgeon? What sets you apart from the rest? I couldn't find anything on the site that explained this.

 

i know what you mean, my brother who made it for me is in advertising and thinks it wouldget a better responce being worded like that. i dont particually like it, and its between me and my collegue with the experience i have 3 he has 2 and a bit. i know its not a lot, but there are so many guys out there now just trying to stand out a bit.

 

and as for the tree surgery a lot....... dunno really haha. down to wording again. thanks for the advise though guys. will get it sorted asap.

Edited June 8, 2010 by Adam

[grumpydavesmith]

HI

 

Just a small point, get a different email address. Using a hotmail one dont look that professional!! i personally wouldnt email a company that uses one. Set one up thats linked to your web address.

 

Cheers

 

Dave:BoomSmilie_anim:

[ben lightfoot]

Hampshire spelt wrong in the first line too, missing the second h.

[Dave]

Nice site, looks good

 

One thing I did spot though, don't know if it's right or wrong but where you're talking about insurance you've put £5 million pounds - just didn't think would need both the £ and the word pounds?

 

Cheers Dave

[Ropey]

Nice Clean looking site. I would leave the multiple references to "tree surgery" in there. The web bots will rank this highly in any searches so you will rank higher.

Key words are as important and the way a site looks, if you can't get a top ranking in search engines then people don't come to your site.

 

Try going into your common search engine and type in tree surgery and see what you get, you may need to talk to your Bro to list some more Key words to help your rankings