Moving away from trees for a change

[Mesterh]

high standards to have you see us as the absolute choice

 

'to have' doesnt seem like proper english to me. "high standards show we are the absolute choice" maybe?

 

 

[Graham]

16 minutes ago, Steve Bullman said:

Thats what I was always taught, however things seem different these days. Most websites are published with 1 space as it apparently makes it easier to read.

I'm not convinced it scans better with one space but ...hey ho.  Don't forget 'striving'.

[Steve Bullman]

fixed that already

[TIMON]

Nice work Steve. The important info is well displayed. It shows the company in a good light.
“Our consistently high standards single us out as the smart choice”
I do a lot of ‘wordsmith-ing in my job and I find you can go on for ever tweaking stuff.

[Steve Bullman]

18 minutes ago, TIMON said:

Nice work Steve. The important info is well displayed. It shows the company in a good light.
“Our consistently high standards single us out as the smart choice”
I do a lot of ‘wordsmith-ing in my job and I find you can go on for ever tweaking stuff.

Yep I know that!  Everyone will read it differently as well.

I paid for an online course in copyrighting, just not had the time to sit through it yet

[TIMON]

Yep I know that!  Everyone will read it differently as well.

I paid for an online course in copyrighting, just not had the time to sit through it yet

I get my Mrs to proof-read anything really important I have to rite.

[tree-fancier123]

6 minutes ago, TIMON said:

 

I get my Mrs to proof-read anything really important I have to rite.
 

 

wise move