Moving away from trees for a change

[Yournamehere]

26 minutes ago, Steve Bullman said:

this bit you mean?  That image is due to be changed as soon as I can convince her to let me take a photo of her

 

 

That's the bit!

The two parts are not connected.

Put the pic on the right hand side and it all joins up.

[Vespasian]

31 minutes ago, Steve Bullman said:

noted, will slow it down a bit, thanks

I don't like that text comin and goin at all..   get rid of it or keep it up all the time..

 

I might suggest moving the woman's pic off the front page as it comes across as facebooky.. put her mug on another page...

 

other that that, thats a good job, nice colour scheme for a girly business..

[eggsarascal]

Home page... "because of that, we are". doesn't need the Comma.

 

 

[Yournamehere]

... and same with the pic on the 'Contact Us' page: she is looking out of the frame - which is bad, swap it to the left and she is looking into the frame - which is good.

[Steve Bullman]

1 minute ago, Yournamehere said:

... and same with the pic on the 'Contact Us' page: she is looking out of the frame - which is bad, swap it to the left and she is looking into the frame - which is good.

I agree, it does look better, thanks ?

[Yournamehere]

4 minutes ago, Steve Bullman said:

I agree, it does look better, thanks ?

Yer welcome!

Happy Days.

[Graham]

Because of that we are constantly thriving to improve our already high standards to have you see us as the absolute choice for your home. 

 

Thriving?  Striving.  Also two spaces after a full stop and one after a comma.

[eggsarascal]

Is changing between "house ", and "Home" correct, or should it be kept the same?

 

Any pedants about?

[Graham]

For more than 15 years, we’ve earned a name for 

 

No need for a comma before 'we've'.

 

Now who's a pedant :-)

[Steve Bullman]

10 minutes ago, Graham said:

Because of that we are constantly thriving to improve our already high standards to have you see us as the absolute choice for your home. 

 

Thriving?  Striving.  Also two spaces after a full stop and one after a comma.

Thats what I was always taught, however things seem different these days. Most websites are published with 1 space as it apparently makes it easier to read.