thoughts on website?

[chris cnc]

hi guys, i created this website using a sort of template based system on webs.com, i dont have the proper domain name yet as i havent paid for it, but i will get round to it as its only around £20 per year.

 

it would be good to have some input from yourselves on the wording, anything i could add, remove or improve.

 

Anyway just wonderin if you could take a look, any constructive criticism/ advice apprecited!

 

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[Arborist Sites]

I cant understand why everyone uses these sites that have adwords on them that show your competitors

 

Its a simple site, cant say much more to be totally honest.

 

Here is one i am working on at the moment http://www.swhtreeservices.co.uk

Edited April 8, 2010 by Arborist Sites

[Steve Bullman]

people monitor these things, id get on and buy that domain name asap i were you

[Arborist Sites]

people monitor these things, id get on and buy that domain name asap i were you

 

Did cross my mind but i am not evil

[chris cnc]

the ads disappear when i pay the fee for the domain name, which i will do once the site is properly finished and worthy haha

 

i know its simple, im just looking for ways i could improve it without making it too boring/wordy

 

it is for cusomers after all, so theres no point overloading it with stuff they wont understand or care about

 

chris

[chris cnc]

what do you mean by monitor? buy the domain name before i get to it or something?

[Mozza]

Ive just bought your domain name, I will sell it to you for £200

[Steve Bullman]

what do you mean by monitor? buy the domain name before i get to it or something?

 

yes, then send you a nice email offering you the domain name for £100 or something stupid

indicentally...domains dont cost £20, if they are trying to charge you that they are ripping you off.

 

£2.99 for a .co.uk for the year http://www.123-reg.co.uk/

i had an email from someone a few months back offering me arbtalk.com for £50

 

i knew this name wasnt available previously, so i checked the availability of it, and it was indeed listed as available.....these people were obviously going to try and sell it to me, if i agreed, they were going to snap it up for £9.99 then make a nice little bit of profit out of me.

[Spikey]

I would't list NPTC certs especially if you don't have the nessasary have a look at my site if you like what you see you could have a word with my missus she is now doing a open uni course after enjoying building mine you may be able to strike up a deal

[chris cnc]

ok i see, i feel like a right tit, im on soring it now then ill be back to the thread

 

cheers for the heads up guys