ive had a short promo video made

[geoff]

Looks good!

[Gareth Dalzell]

That's a cracking promo video, well filmed, edited etc.

 

Like other have mentioned, the voice isn't working for me. Young crew, using modern techniques, sharp set-up, but the voice is sending out different vibes.

[Steve Bullman]

Young crew, using modern techniques, sharp set-up, but the voice is sending out different vibes.

 

Thats the intelligent version of what i was trying to get over

[Rhystree]

whats your view on this one??

 

 

[ame=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AtrlDjUyuM0]YouTube - Chippings Tree Surgery - Tree Surgeons in Medway[/ame]

[Chris Gagen]

really like the vid, but was the voice over guy JML's reject?? sounds all too similar to those stupid JML product adverts all over the shops!

[Chris Gagen]

really like the vid, but was the voice over guy JML's reject?? sounds all too similar to those stupid JML product adverts all over the shops!

 

Rhystree that was not directed at you... your vid however is also spot on, with a far less grating voice...

[Gareth Dalzell]

What's this NTPC certification he speaks off - , we're getting left behind over here, we only have NPTC tickets:confused1:

 

I think the first vid is perfect, just the voice over

[Rhystree]

and this one

 

[ame=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8HqrwsGPUL0]YouTube - K Shepherd Tree Surgeons & Forestry[/ame]

 

 

i watched both of these but went for the profesional voice over. i thought it suited my company profile better. that and i would of been a bit um, er, and , and and all that stuff when you are being filmed!!

[Rhystree]

no the views are all good, thats why ive put it on here. ive got one editing chance so i could change the voice. i thought you guys would point out any mistakes or changes thats why arb talk is a useful tool.

 

i think some editing should of been done on the chippings video. does any one on here know them?? i would of thought an nptc assesror would not of said that wrong and more than once. i know what im thinking....

[Gareth Dalzell]

and this one

 

 

 

i watched both of these but went for the profesional voice over. i thought it suited my company profile better. that and i would of been a bit um, er, and , and and all that stuff when you are being filmed!!

 

Watched them all again now. You one is still the best by far. Don't like the personal bit to camera in other of the other two. To much self recommendation is no recommendation when its in the "first person"

You vid is the one - just imagine a different voice. Listen to the tv or radio for voice types or listen to your friends/family voices and imagine a less mature but confident voice. Your guys diction and delivery is perfect, its just too mature a voice