promo video take 2

[testcricket01]

so the first video i did was more a video of all my videos into 1 and i think this time ive got more in the ball park for a video for a customers point of view apart from my horrible voice that i hate i think its alright.

 

 

thoughts please

 

 

the first video is the new one and the 2nd video is the old one, quite a big improvement i feel. thoughts please

[ame=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qXG6HbSjxiw]YouTube - ‪James Hoddy Tree Services‬‏[/ame]

 

 

[ame=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jPlBgXpF7kk]YouTube - ‪james hoddy tree services promo video‬‏[/ame]

[Daniël Bos]

Nothing wrong with your voice mate, it does what voices do doesn't it?

It does sound a lot like your reading a script though, rather than actually meaning what you say?

 

Good feedback doesn't lead to improvement, just bolsters your ego.

[testcricket01]

Nothing wrong with your voice mate, it does what voices do doesn't it?

It does sound a lot like your reading a script though, rather than actually meaning what you say?

 

Good feedback doesn't lead to improvement, just bolsters your ego.

 

 

it might have been cause i was reading what i had written down lol and i hate doing it into a mic like your talking to your self etc

[scottythepinetree]

Actually think the voice-over would inspire confidence in a customer. You are pretty softly spoken, a far cry from the chainsaw weilding yob that domestic customers would be trying to avoid. Reckon you could do without explaining how we get into trees though (throwline climbing rope etc.). All a customer needs to know is that we are trained to a high standard, and competent to do it safely, as is shown all throughout the rest of the video. Doesn't do any harm, but I just feel like it doesn't need to be in there. Good job tho.

[testcricket01]

Actually think the voice-over would inspire confidence in a customer. You are pretty softly spoken, a far cry from the chainsaw weilding yob that domestic customers would be trying to avoid. Reckon you could do without explaining how we get into trees though (throwline climbing rope etc.). All a customer needs to know is that we are trained to a high standard, and competent to do it safely, as is shown all throughout the rest of the video. Doesn't do any harm, but I just feel like it doesn't need to be in there. Good job tho.

 

i did think about if it was needed. in the end i thought ill stick it on the end, some people (mostly older people) like to know how you do it, and dont want a guy in shorts turning up with a big ladder no ropes i think the bit about the lowering rope maybe more of interest though, alot of people do worry about damage being caused still ill take your word for the voice

[WoodED]

so the first video i did was more a video of all my videos into 1 and i think this time ive got more in the ball park for a video for a customers point of view apart from my horrible voice that i hate i think its alright.

 

 

thoughts please

 

 

the first video is the new one and the 2nd video is the old one, quite a big improvement i feel. thoughts please

YouTube - ‪James Hoddy Tree Services‬‏

 

 

YouTube - ‪james hoddy tree services promo video‬‏

 

add abit of music/ written word on the screen rather than speech