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[samarb]

Hi all. I seem to change my website monthly and am never completely happy so I am asking that you run your eyes over it and give me some pointers SHEASBY - Flash Intro. We have also signed up to twitter recently and would love some more followers so if you have time we are @sheasbytrees.

 

Thanks all

 

Sam

 

 

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[shavey]

hello sam your website looks clean and fresh looks good the only thing in my opinion is the the background is a little bit too white for me

 

on another note the number of times i have passed through wheddon x on the way down to see Les down at timberscombe quarry and didnt realise your base was up there :thumbup:

[Daniël Bos]

-I don't see the point of the "page in front"? why, what does it add?

-On the top of each page page you refer to yourselves as both "Sheasby Tree Surgey"

-On the emergency page you offer "piece of mind" to your customers. Unless you do a sideline in brain surgery "peace of mind" is probably more suitable.

-On the tree surgery page, the first sentence is grammatically odd: ...best for trees environment...

-On Crown thinning, should it be "tree's crown" not "trees crown"

 

I'm a bit of a pedant, so my wife tells me...

[samarb]

-I don't see the point of the "page in front"? why, what does it add?

 

-On the top of each page page you refer to yourselves as both "Sheasby Tree Surgey"

 

-On the emergency page you offer "piece of mind" to your customers. Unless you do a sideline in brain surgery "peace of mind" is probably more suitable.

 

-On the tree surgery page, the first sentence is grammatically odd: ...best for trees environment...

 

-On Crown thinning, should it be "tree's crown" not "trees crown"

 

 

 

I'm a bit of a pedant, so my wife tells me...

 

 

 

Hi Rover. I don't understand first point can you elaborate, other points I have never been good at spelling or grammar so appreciate the input and ill work to improve it. Anything else I have missed please let me know.

 

Sam

 

 

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[samarb]

hello sam your website looks clean and fresh looks good the only thing in my opinion is the the background is a little bit too white for me

 

 

 

on another note the number of times i have passed through wheddon x on the way down to see Les down at timberscombe quarry and didnt realise your base was up there :thumbup:

 

 

Hi Shavey, we have just moved location from Porlock to Wheddon Cross so I can be closer to home. Yes it's is very white but on purpose as this is our company colour. I don't think I know Les but do you mean Reg Holcolmbe who does the chainsaw maintenance.

 

Sam

 

 

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[shavey]

hello sam yes i mean reg i dont know why i put les he was original owner

[samarb]

Hi, I never met Les. Reg is retiring and selling up which is a real shame, I hope something similar goes in but I feel it may go to the developers. Feel free to pop in next time your passing we are next to ArkATV.

 

Sam

 

 

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[Daniël Bos]

Hi Rover. I don't understand first point can you elaborate

 

 

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Could be just my computer, but when I click the link supplied above I don't get to your "home" page. I get a page with no useful information and a request to "click here to continue"

Whenever I see "click here to continue" on a normal web page alarm bells start ringing and a big "SCAM" alert sign flashes in my head...

 

I was wondering why it's there, what does it add for your potential customers, how does it convince them to ask you to work for them?

[samarb]

Hi, see your point now. I think ill probably remove it. Can you also elaborate on On the top of each page page you refer to yourselves as both "Sheasby Tree Surgey. Thanks, Sam

 

 

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[Daniël Bos]

Hi, see your point now. I think ill probably remove it. Can you also elaborate on On the top of each page page you refer to yourselves as both "Sheasby Tree Surgey. Thanks, Sam

 

 

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Sorry, I forgot to edit my post after I'd decided against making a pedantic point about whether your business is called "sheasby's" or "sheasby tree surgery ltd".

I'd rolled that in with the fact that the header on all your pages states tree surgey, not surgery:001_smile: