help with translation

[naturarbo]

Hi please all english speakers, read,correct and upgrade.I am makin a flyer for recreational tree climbing.Text shouldn't be much longer then this.

"THE ULTIMATE BACK TO NATURE DAY!

Recreational tree climbing develops visual & physical coordination & it's a superb experience for schools, families, campsites & team building events.

Climb a tree supervised by a team of fully certified & insured tree climbers that will guaranty a safe CLIMB TO THE TOP!

NOW AVALIABLE TO EVERYONE!"

thanks in advance

[Steve Bullman]

"THE ULTIMATE BACK TO NATURE DAY!

Recreational tree climbing develops visual & physical coordination. It is also a superb experience for schools, families, campsites & team building events.

Climb a tree supervised by a team of fully certified & insured tree climbers that will guarantee you a safe CLIMB TO THE TOP!

NOW AVAILABLE TO EVERYONE!"

[naturarbo]

44 minutes ago, Steve Bullman said:

"THE ULTIMATE BACK TO NATURE DAY!

Recreational tree climbing develops visual & physical coordination. It is also a superb experience for schools, families, campsites & team building events.

Climb a tree supervised by a team of fully certified & insured tree climbers that will guarantee you a safe CLIMB TO THE TOP!

NOW AVAILABLE TO EVERYONE!"

Cheers Steve.would you add or change anything else???

[Vedhoggar]

On 12/07/2020 at 13:14, naturarbo said:

Hi please all english speakers, read,correct and upgrade.I am makin a flyer for recreational tree climbing.Text shouldn't be much longer then this.

"THE ULTIMATE BACK TO NATURE DAY!

Recreational tree climbing develops visual & physical coordination & it's a superb experience for schools, families, campsites & team building events.

Climb a tree supervised by a team of fully certified & insured tree climbers that will guaranty a safe CLIMB TO THE TOP!

NOW AVALIABLE TO EVERYONE!"

thanks in advance

THE ULTIMATE BACK TO NATURE DAY!

Recreational tree climbing develops visual & physical coordination and it's a superb experience for schools, families, campsites & team building events.

Climb a tree supervised by a team of fully certified & insured tree climbers that will guarantee a safe CLIMB TO THE TOP!

NOW AVAILABLE TO EVERYONE!

 

 

[Mick Dempsey]

Drop the “&” and use “and” instead.

[naturarbo]

tree people thanks when flyer is done will upload it