Moving away from trees for a change

[Steve Bullman]

Just finished my first non-tree related website

 

https://becksparkle.co.uk

 

Not as easy writing content as it is for tree surgery sites

[josharb87]

Looks good!

[eggsarascal]

The "bits" that flash up on the home page are too quick. Not just my opinion, The Mrs said the same thing...... Not that either count for much.

[Yournamehere]

I don't know much about web-sites but I do know a bit about pictures.

Can the picture of the lady's head go on the rhs of the page?

So that she is looking into the text and meeting the reader's eye.

It would bring it all together rather than being two separate parts.

 

ETA So as to make the text a speech-bubble.

Edited June 10, 2018 by Yournamehere

[Shaff]

Looks good fella. I’d use them based on their website if I was after such services?

[Steve Bullman]

3 minutes ago, Yournamehere said:

I don't know much about web-sites but I do know a bit about pictures.

Can the picture of the lady's head go on the rhs of the page?

So that she is looking into the text and meeting the reader's eye.

It would bring it all together rather than being two separate parts.

 

ETA So as to make the text a speech-bubble.

this bit you mean?  That image is due to be changed as soon as I can convince her to let me take a photo of her

 

 

[Steve Bullman]

9 minutes ago, eggsarascal said:

The "bits" that flash up on the home page are too quick. Not just my opinion, The Mrs said the same thing...... Not that either count for much.

noted, will slow it down a bit, thanks

[arbwork]

Steve, looks good, I agree with picture on right comment as above, also the face photo seems to be out of focus on my screen

[eggsarascal]

I'm not sure I'd go with "Cleaning crew", "cleaning team", maybe.

[AHPP]

12 minutes ago, Steve Bullman said:

That image is due to be changed as soon as I can convince her to let me take a photo of her

 

 

 

Marigolds, apron, feather duster etc?

Edited June 10, 2018 by AHPP